Monday, 20 December 2010
Fiazah's paragraph
Emerging through the silver mist a shaft of sunlight revealed itself on the tropical Pandora. Hovering high in the sky, the helicopter flew towards the breathtaking Hallelujah mountains. The magical mountains danced as the wind whistled softly in and out of it’s long vines. Just then, Jake landed on his banshee, he looked out at the awe inspiring Pandora, his eyes widened in amazement.
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Thank you MR.O'Brien for putting my FAB work on the computer to share with others! By Fiazah
I AM SO PROUD OF MY WRITING! I FEEL LIKE I AM THE QUEEN OF LETTER'S!
A wonderful Paragraph
Fiazah, it was my pleasure. You worked so hard on this and deserve to feel very proud of your work. Well done.
I'm proud of you fiazah!
It was a great paragraph, loved to read any more paragraphs of yours!
It felt like i was there, Nice!
OMG it is so so fantastic
Ahh thanks safa i realy like your work too! i love your avatar mask safa.k
Fizzy ,you can guess who's this ,you've got a splendid brain.You certainly are little,however you are a big brainbox!
Ahh! your writing is great too buddy!
wow now ur gr8 at everything!
Your too kind everybody
u've inspired mehhhhh
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