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Friday 1 October 2010

Kayinat's Diary

This week we have been busy writing our diaries inspired by the film 'Touching the Void'. Here is our Super Star of the Week, Kayinat's amazing diary.

Dear Diary,
As I was descending the towering mountain, I put the Ice Pick on the snow (I wasn't concentrating because of the tiredness.) I put the Crampons on the surface for grip and then I climbed down and suddenly slipped and heard a snap!
''Aaaaaaah!'' The agonising pain was killing me. It came from my leg and I instantly knew I broke it and I knew what this meant. The pain was like it was exploding out my body. If Simon found out he would be furious, but I was helpless. This was going to lead us both to death, and if we did die then I would at fault. This frightened me and made tremble with fear. When Simon had found out I was amazed that he decided to stay and help.

17 comments:

Anonymous said...

that is a really gud story kayinat well done:):}

saman said...

yeah kayionat well done sis keep it goin

kayinat said...

Thanks Whoever you are.

Jamal said...

That's good!

Shazmeen said...

Your diary is so cool,you have a 'great sence of humor'!INDEED...
What a amazing mind?

Athif said...

brilliant diary as everyone else said keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hanzil (Athif cousin) said...

brilliant diary

Athif Dad said...

great diary you should teach all the class okay

Zak said...

Your diary is great!

Aftab said...

Your great publisher you shouid become a auther and keep it up down let the magic go away!

Athif said...

brilliant like my dad said and my cousin Hanzila exellent

saima said...

what a great diary, kayinat you have used powerful adjectives and pharses well done!

Saima said...

great diary Kayinat! you might become a auther one day

Kayinat said...

I don't want to become an author maybe I will have that as my 3rd choice.

Athif said...

Kit Kat Kayinat Estupendas diary you are the best keep showing off in the class!!!!!

Rabiah said...

Well done kit-kat-kayinat my mate and my cuzin ur diary was absoluetly great keep it up u have a good mind of things.

Kayinat said...

Thank you Rabiah