This week we have been busy writing our diaries inspired by the film 'Touching the Void'. Here is our Super Star of the Week, Kayinat's amazing diary.
Dear Diary,
As I was descending the towering mountain, I put the Ice Pick on the snow (I wasn't concentrating because of the tiredness.) I put the Crampons on the surface for grip and then I climbed down and suddenly slipped and heard a snap!
''Aaaaaaah!'' The agonising pain was killing me. It came from my leg and I instantly knew I broke it and I knew what this meant. The pain was like it was exploding out my body. If Simon found out he would be furious, but I was helpless. This was going to lead us both to death, and if we did die then I would at fault. This frightened me and made tremble with fear. When Simon had found out I was amazed that he decided to stay and help.
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17 comments:
that is a really gud story kayinat well done:):}
yeah kayionat well done sis keep it goin
Thanks Whoever you are.
That's good!
Your diary is so cool,you have a 'great sence of humor'!INDEED...
What a amazing mind?
brilliant diary as everyone else said keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
brilliant diary
great diary you should teach all the class okay
Your diary is great!
Your great publisher you shouid become a auther and keep it up down let the magic go away!
brilliant like my dad said and my cousin Hanzila exellent
what a great diary, kayinat you have used powerful adjectives and pharses well done!
great diary Kayinat! you might become a auther one day
I don't want to become an author maybe I will have that as my 3rd choice.
Kit Kat Kayinat Estupendas diary you are the best keep showing off in the class!!!!!
Well done kit-kat-kayinat my mate and my cuzin ur diary was absoluetly great keep it up u have a good mind of things.
Thank you Rabiah
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