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Monday 20 December 2010

Fiazah's paragraph

Emerging through the silver mist a shaft of sunlight revealed itself on the tropical Pandora. Hovering high in the sky, the helicopter flew towards the breathtaking Hallelujah mountains. The magical mountains danced as the wind whistled softly in and out of it’s long vines. Just then, Jake landed on his banshee, he looked out at the awe inspiring Pandora, his eyes widened in amazement.

12 comments:

Fiazah said...

Thank you MR.O'Brien for putting my FAB work on the computer to share with others! By Fiazah

Fiazah said...

I AM SO PROUD OF MY WRITING! I FEEL LIKE I AM THE QUEEN OF LETTER'S!

Kayinat said...

A wonderful Paragraph

Mr O'Brien said...

Fiazah, it was my pleasure. You worked so hard on this and deserve to feel very proud of your work. Well done.

Safa. K said...

I'm proud of you fiazah!

It was a great paragraph, loved to read any more paragraphs of yours!

It felt like i was there, Nice!

Alina said...

OMG it is so so fantastic

Fiazah said...

Ahh thanks safa i realy like your work too! i love your avatar mask safa.k

Shazmeen said...

Fizzy ,you can guess who's this ,you've got a splendid brain.You certainly are little,however you are a big brainbox!

Fiazh said...

Ahh! your writing is great too buddy!

Safa. K said...

wow now ur gr8 at everything!

Anonymous said...

Your too kind everybody

A pupil from Djanogly City Academy, Zareena said...

u've inspired mehhhhh